Kinda shirt kawaii! But you’ve been on a kick lately with vocaloids :) You’re awesome. This song could’ve had a bridge where it slowed the beat down...
Kinda shirt kawaii! But you’ve been on a kick lately with vocaloids :) You’re awesome. This song could’ve had a bridge where it slowed the beat down...
eh i made it in like 30 mins tbh lol
The :30 is where everything in the song starts to come together. But honestly the contrast between the happy and the sad in such short time does kind of throw me off?
This is so hard giving you bad criticism! The song is fire for experiencing experimental rhythm haste a time where people might actually :/ think like this!
Keep it up, happy to sad in 90 seconds is like eh! ITSELF IN AND FOR the future man, mark my words. You gots its kiddo. Its aint nothin yous evah gonna see pop up on shelves at no deparhtmint center grocery corner joint nithersss! “Its” alllllll youuuu got!
You don't have to feel bad about giving criticism my dude. I deserve it. I'm not at all a musician and I'm just kinda learning as I go. And yeah the weird minor key change is weird for some reason I couldn't figure out the exact chords
i was a little thrown back, i do like traditional house music, and with the japanese flair added to this mix. IT's not a bad song, it's greatly composed and with so many digital elements at the fore front it's really difficult to saying anything is "lazy" about this song. the moments right before the big bass drop felt rushed, i would've worked a little more on the timing of the track skips....
these are all nit picks friend. It's a really really cool song. you never give up, and if you go places good, if not...keep making compositions, it'll take you somewhere!
Wow... :D Thank you so much!
Ending. Tight asf. Opening, weak asf. Overall.
Im impressed with the composition and it makes me feel fucking really emo. You’re not far from something! Make more music and hear back!
how is the intro weak?
What a flow! Nothing more to say than well put together, simple and with so much for my imagination to ponder :)
Thanks mang!
Funky fucking shit NonSter!
i can see me throwing this sample into a mix if i were a DJ, great injection of Fuk Yeh and fucc dat/
o b r a v o
I appreciate the listen, and thanks! :)
Big Zombie vibes. You have a great voice and this song has a good vibe, but the verse itself is kind of lost in translation of...In means to what context, i understand the representation fo the n***as, i fuck with mine, you fuck with yours. it's a good ending to the verse,
but like, the savagery just seems misdirected. try to punch a more direct audience next time :) i fuck with the track.
the "savagery" does not exist to target, its bars in a vacuum, very common, braggadocious things to cover. the feedback is appreciated, I guess tho
i really like this, i think a guitar over this could've had a big impact.
little short i wanted to be JAMMMM sandwiched.
solid piece, maybe it's not even done?
music is a strange mistress non?
Definitely could develop it more! I'd say it's more of a demo than anything but it's a fun little thing I guess
NUT NUT NUT!!!!
Liberal scum bag <3 this is so hard >:)
I wanna get lost under a freeway and throw syringes at doctors when they drive by!
Such a good piece of music, it actually pulls my dark out and makes me think that i can do what i set out to do. Libby your music is changing my world 🔥✝️🔥
Thanks for your heartfelt review!
having some idea of how music works.
I'm dissapointed with the "make it what you want aspect"
that's your job bud.
but the drums are solid and the keyboard is synthesized well.
lazy vocals.
oh, see, it wasn't made for him.
Oh, eye see,
Fuck shit ass fart toodily daddly i'll gladly write for you no mothafucking dilly dally. Want creative comedy, rhyming or non, fuck your stupid ass cause i'll do it so fast consider the task gone.
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